dedicated to Blue Sky Dreaming and her series of accepting autumn paintings
Whirl
First, a Hansa yellow morning sky
then, on the drive home, a rainbow.
The too sweet taste of Pistachio meringue.
A whiff of fear.
Hair falling to the floor, snip, snip.
Rustling leaves drifting: a gypsy whirl.
This birthday gives pause. This one.
Both feet in autumn now.
What was thought known is now unknown.
I am solitary, banished, exiled.
Bare and thin, my branches face the chill.
Your winter fire will warm me.
for more Magpie Tales poems and stories using the above photo as a prompt see Magpie Tales.
6 comments:
I like your poem Suki. I can see those locks falling like autumn leaves.
Wow Suki, this gave me chills. Literally!
"Both feet in autumn now"
I love this piece.
Thanks for sharing.
I like the feel of this one - so accepting.
Very moving Suki. A couple of lines really struck a chord with me.
Have we missed your birthday? I seem to recall you're an autumn child.
xo♥
I love this.....and uh, oh....I have the feeling Lo is right....are you an October girl too?
Love,
♥ Robin ♥
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