tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34861243.post9006910562071899935..comments2024-01-20T12:32:41.342-05:00Comments on Paint, Poems and Ponderings: Pilot Light Moonsukipoethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09351851210507048174noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34861243.post-6742780921760491982011-02-21T12:32:07.474-05:002011-02-21T12:32:07.474-05:00Feels like the season, nice to be warm...mossy, di...Feels like the season, nice to be warm...mossy, dim moon.Teri and her Stylish Adventure Cats https://www.blogger.com/profile/00995773243323674858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34861243.post-16063959073257992562011-02-06T00:17:08.091-05:002011-02-06T00:17:08.091-05:00i'm with marion.
suki, the sense and sound o...i'm with marion. <br /><br />suki, the sense and sound of her soles (souls) is mysterious and compelling. <br /><br />i always like to read your poetry. thank you<br /><br />♥<br />kjkjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34861243.post-76347496232079534672011-02-05T22:33:15.420-05:002011-02-05T22:33:15.420-05:00Beautiful. You are very good at imagery.Beautiful. You are very good at imagery.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34861243.post-2856782625555000102011-02-05T09:53:09.183-05:002011-02-05T09:53:09.183-05:00I'd love to find a bed of moss under an ancien...I'd love to find a bed of moss under an ancient maple tree. You've made it sound as if it was the most comfortable bed ever!<br /><br />"Within, a flame flares<br />as if her feet were a match against the rough." I'm not even sure why I love this line...but I do!<br /><br />Have a warm and safe weekend, Suki!Marionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00607220451457829777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34861243.post-41649982692906342042011-02-05T09:02:21.279-05:002011-02-05T09:02:21.279-05:00sounds like the poem is leaving some folks wanting...sounds like the poem is leaving some folks wanting more clarity or something. I do think it is a bit awkward. for me the image of her feet as a match is strong. I write most of these poems with little revision and so post them as first drafts. Not that I am big into revising at the moment. I am letting them be their awkward selves.sukipoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09351851210507048174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34861243.post-52361312297176879062011-02-05T08:46:55.055-05:002011-02-05T08:46:55.055-05:00I echo the others. Wonderful imagery! But I'm ...I echo the others. Wonderful imagery! But I'm left wondering what drew her there as well. Mmm, nice mystery!studio lolohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15363808478293833466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34861243.post-59028314906448280612011-02-04T21:23:58.556-05:002011-02-04T21:23:58.556-05:00and?!!
What drew her out there
Why did she sleep o...and?!!<br />What drew her out there<br />Why did she sleep on the moss<br />under the stars<br />I want more of this bewitching taleSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34861243.post-74850875886852171642011-02-04T18:40:16.668-05:002011-02-04T18:40:16.668-05:00Is this you going to the pond wishing for dry warm...Is this you going to the pond wishing for dry warm weather to sleep in the moss? :)Cris, Artist in Oregonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15067969984221375853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34861243.post-4604400219797993022011-02-04T17:09:19.819-05:002011-02-04T17:09:19.819-05:00When I read this outloud it really comes to life! ...When I read this outloud it really comes to life! Love all the imagery and the texture to this poem.Lynn Cohenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12094038275377357886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34861243.post-29340703816492604002011-02-04T16:36:58.481-05:002011-02-04T16:36:58.481-05:00Very mysterious. Did she sleep well out there? Wha...Very mysterious. Did she sleep well out there? What drew here there? What woke her? So many questions here.Katiejanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10703557560000189704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34861243.post-25559329324102325082011-02-04T15:51:13.596-05:002011-02-04T15:51:13.596-05:00Beautiful, poignant - yet - hopeful. I like the i...Beautiful, poignant - yet - hopeful. I like the imagery very much.<br /><br />Love to you, O Poetess,and to Bibs!<br /><br />♥ Robin ♥Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15247046205493711677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34861243.post-26930746275671915562011-02-04T14:42:03.871-05:002011-02-04T14:42:03.871-05:00as if her feet were a match against the rough.
Lo...as if her feet were a match against the rough.<br /><br />Love that image of ignition of the flame created by walking on the rough.Leslie Avon Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09235003342775117469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34861243.post-78027650127026721872011-02-04T11:52:33.196-05:002011-02-04T11:52:33.196-05:00Such nice warm thoughts for such a cold winters da...Such nice warm thoughts for such a cold winters day. THat bed of moss would be most comforting.Lisa at Greenbowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07743973292900758183noreply@blogger.com